Does this Spanish sound right? - fotos de playas desnudas
I had to write this essay, I too, Spanish, and I'm not sure if this is true or not. If this is not good, you were kind enough to correct me that? Thank you:
Hello! I could go to Hawaii. By mucho gusto! First, I went with my family to explore. I See the Playa Azul. On the way to the sun. I bring a swimsuit and Los antenjos sun and sun protection. Then we take pictures. I will not go ponto Falls. The next morning when we left. Finally, we were escorted to go to bed. I see the sea and the umbrella. By mucho gusto!
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Thank you very much for your help! I fight in Spanish, and I think when you see how it would really help me better understand my mistakes.
Thank you again!
Sunday, December 13, 2009
Fotos De Playas Desnudas Does This Spanish Sound Right?
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2 comments:
I rate as follows:
Hello! I could go to Hawaii. I really liked! First, I went with my family to explore. I looked at the Playa Azul. There was plenty of sunshine. Bring a bathing suit, sunglasses and sunscreen. Then we took pictures. I am not ponto Falls. Finally, we went? and peace. I saw the sea and the umbrella. I really liked.
Some sentences make no sense, like the morning when we went (in the morning, we are wrong?)
accom: not a word ... Did you mean: camping (camping?)
was very pleased: It was most enjoyable?
More or less what he said was:
Hi, I managed to go to Hawaii. It was beautiful. At first I was studying with my family. I saw the blue sea. There was plenty of sunshine. I took the bathing suit and sunglasses and Coppertone. Then it came to shooting to be done. I have not the waterfall. In the morning we drove. Finally, we went? and peace. I see the sea and the umbrella. There was a lot of Nice.
We hope all this helps.
I rate as follows:
Hello! I could go to Hawaii. I really liked! First, I went with my family to explore. I looked at the Playa Azul. There was plenty of sunshine. Bring a bathing suit, sunglasses and sunscreen. Then we took pictures. I am not ponto Falls. Finally, we went? and peace. I saw the sea and the umbrella. I really liked.
Some sentences make no sense, like the morning when we went (in the morning, we are wrong?)
accom: not a word ... Did you mean: camping (camping?)
was very pleased: It was most enjoyable?
More or less what he said was:
Hi, I managed to go to Hawaii. It was beautiful. At first I was studying with my family. I saw the blue sea. There was plenty of sunshine. I took the bathing suit and sunglasses and Coppertone. Then it came to shooting to be done. I have not the waterfall. In the morning we drove. Finally, we went? and peace. I see the sea and the umbrella. There was a lot of Nice.
We hope all this helps.
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